Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games. What are the negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?

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society
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in youngsters. Most
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children
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use them as
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, the negative impacts of computerised
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bad effects and solutions related to electronic
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of all, Xbox
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addictive;
children
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use to play it for long hours which is totally
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wastage of
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precious
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. As nothing is crucial and expensive more than
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, it cannot be reversed with money or endless efforts. So, spending huge
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on digital
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by
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is totally a wastage which must be spent on academics.
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, these
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indirectly promote violence by the use of army weapons with intense graphics and sometimes, these
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display
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tasks to complete the level. Teenagers learn everything new and acquire that for life; if they will take part in gun culture
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on
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, it could promote unethical and unlawful plans in their memory and they can act
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in
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real
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world which is hazardous for their life.
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16 years old boy killed his friend to complete the task on
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internet
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game.
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, it is the
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responsibility of parents, teachers and government to minimize the bad side of graphical
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government
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should ban
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gun cultural
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and make some laws related to information technology as it is
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uncontrolled sector
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in developing countries.
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, parents keep their
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away from mobiles and laptops as much as possible by limiting their
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to play on
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internet
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and
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them to play outdoor
games
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, schools should give awareness about
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of digital
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and instruct them, not to play video
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these efforts, society can diminish the bad effects of these
games
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. In conclusion, due to
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the unavailability
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of pointed laws for information technology,
games
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on
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is playing with the adolescence of teenagers which can be vanished by some collective efforts of parents, schools and
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lawmakers
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law makers
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lawmakers
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • addiction
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • obesity
  • eye strain
  • inappropriate content
  • social skills
  • isolation
  • academic performance
  • time limits
  • parental supervision
  • age-appropriate
  • physical activities
  • digital literacy
  • balanced computer usage
  • excessive gaming
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