Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games. What are the negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?

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children
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bad effects and solutions related to electronic
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addictive;
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time
. As nothing is crucial and expensive more than
time
, it cannot be reversed with money or endless efforts. So, spending huge
time
on digital
games
by
children
is totally a wastage which must be spent on academics.
Moreover
, these
games
indirectly promote violence by the use of army weapons with intense graphics and sometimes, these
games
display
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tasks to complete the level. Teenagers learn everything new and acquire that for life; if they will take part in gun culture
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, it could promote unethical and unlawful plans in their memory and they can act
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world which is hazardous for their life.
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16 years old boy killed his friend to complete the task on
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game.
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, it is the
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responsibility of parents, teachers and government to minimize the bad side of graphical
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should ban
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gun cultural
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in developing countries.
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them to play outdoor
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of digital
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these efforts, society can diminish the bad effects of these
games
. In conclusion, due to
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of pointed laws for information technology,
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is playing with the adolescence of teenagers which can be vanished by some collective efforts of parents, schools and
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