Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Many
people
opine that adverts alude
us towards unnecessary purchasing Correct your spelling
allude
elude
although
others consider it as catalyst
between buyers and sellers. According to me, Add an article
a catalyst
the catalyst
commercials
improve the lifestyle of people
and helps
businesses to grow easily but sometimes it Wrong verb form
help
drawn
the pocket of Add the auxiliary verb
drew
has drawn
purchaser
for nothing.
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the purchaser
a purchaser
First
of all, it is not an easy task to be aware about
every new and updated goods and Change the preposition
of
services
available in the market. So, Fix the agreement mistake
service
commercials
enhance the knowledge of consumers which is the
win-win situation for business holders and customers. Correct article usage
a
For example
, one of my friend
is Change to a plural noun
friends
fashion
freak but he has Correct article usage
a fashion
hectic
schedule. So, advertisement Add an article
a hectic
make
easy for him to know about new fashion trend and buy Change the verb form
makes
accordingly
.
However
, in this
modern era; many fake websites promote wrong descriptions and benefits of goods and try to fool the buyer with the help of influencing wrong results through video making or editing. As an example, last
month I bought one cosmetic cream by the influence of merchandise on YouTube, but that promises were wrongful even results were detrimental for skin
.
According to me, Add an article
the skin
commercials
if control by sensorship
Correct your spelling
censorship
sponsorship
then
, it is totally in the favour of people
to be aware about
products or services before Change the preposition
of
exchange
Wrong verb form
exchanging
the
cash for wrong or outdated goods. Apart from Correct article usage
apply
this
, in this
pandemic situation, people
do not have full access to market
Correct article usage
the market
then
, commercials
introduce specifications of new items on users mobile phone
. Fix the agreement mistake
phones
For example
, many businesses open their online stores and run their businesses by
the help of advertisements.
In conclusion, if we do faith only on authentic sources and avoid impulsive shopping Change preposition
with
then
advertisements are always in the favour of people
to be updated with new shopping options which can enhance the lifestyle of Add an article
the buyer
buyer
.Fix the agreement mistake
buyers
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