Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, concentration of
children
are matured in well
conditions. Change the adverb
good
Therefore
, TV
, mobile phones or computers are so familiar with them. However
, people hold different about whether reading stories
from a book brings benefits. While some claim that watching TV
or playing video games
is better, I partly agree that reading book
is a good Correct article usage
a book
habit
but sometimes children
can watch TV
or playing
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play
games
to relax and have to be under the control of their parents
.
On the one hand, waching
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watching
TV
or playing computer games
is not really bad if parents
always take care their
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of their
children
.For instance
, children
can watch TV
or playing
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play
games
about
15-20 minutes Change preposition
for about
everyday
after Replace the word
every day
stress
school time as long as we don’t abuse them. According to my,playing video Replace the word
stressful
games
can help children
solve some problems better which can transfer into real life and learn more social knowledge while watching TV
such
as YOUTUBE, HTV, VTV7, NATIONAL GEOGRAPHIC,DISNEY CHANNEL,… That can help children
impove
their English.Correct your spelling
improve
Parents
should be an intructor
and pay attention to Correct your spelling
instructor
children’entertainment
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children entertainment
activites
, watching Correct your spelling
activities
TV
or playing games
is no longer a bad habit
and can not affect to student achievement.
On the other hand
, I support the idea that reading stories
books
is better
and a good Correct article usage
a better
habit
.Studies shown
that Add the auxiliary verb
have shown
showed
parents
should read books
to children
when they are only a few months old. This
will create a habit
of reading books
everyday
, Replace the word
every day
increase
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increasing
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the
children
. Beside
that ,reading Replace the word
Besides
books
helps improve reading and writing ability, stimulate the imagination and remember longer.For example
, we can read stories
books
with children
to keep them motivated, we can ask them various funny questions relates
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related
books
which improving
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improves
focus
of Add an article
the focus
children
and remember their
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the
stories
that they have read or listend
.
In conclusion, reading Correct your spelling
listened
listen
books
is definitely a good habit
which cannot be denied. Beside
that watching Correct your spelling
Besides
TV
or playing computer games
will bring benefits if we know how to spend time with them and use them for the right purpose.Submitted by trandinhthienthao on
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