Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,
children
are matured in
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conditions.
Therefore
,
TV
, mobile phones or computers are so familiar with them.
However
, people hold different about whether reading
stories
from a book brings benefits. While some claim that watching
TV
or playing video
games
is better, I partly agree that reading
book
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a book
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is a good
habit
but sometimes
children
can watch
TV
or
playing
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games
to relax and have to be under the control of their
parents
. On the one hand,
waching
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watching
TV
or playing computer
games
is not really bad if
parents
always take care
their
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children
.
For instance
,
children
can watch
TV
or
playing
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play
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games
about
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15-20 minutes
everyday
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school time as long as we don’t abuse them. According to my,playing video
games
can help
children
solve some problems better which can transfer into real life and learn more social knowledge while watching
TV
such
as YOUTUBE, HTV, VTV7, NATIONAL GEOGRAPHIC,DISNEY CHANNEL,… That can help
children
impove
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improve
their English.
Parents
should be an
intructor
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instructor
and pay attention to
children’entertainment
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children entertainment
activites
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activities
, watching
TV
or playing
games
is no longer a bad
habit
and can not affect to student achievement.
On the other hand
, I support the idea that reading
stories
books
is
better
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a better
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and a good
habit
.Studies
shown
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that
parents
should read
books
to
children
when they are only a few months old.
This
will create a
habit
of reading
books
everyday
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,
increase
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concentration of
children
.
Beside
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that ,reading
books
helps improve reading and writing ability, stimulate the imagination and remember longer.
For example
, we can read
stories
books
with
children
to keep them motivated, we can ask them various funny questions
relates
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to the
books
which
improving
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focus
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the focus
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of
children
and remember
their
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stories
that they have read or
listend
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listened
listen
. In conclusion, reading
books
is definitely a good
habit
which cannot be denied.
Beside
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Besides
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that watching
TV
or playing computer
games
will bring benefits if we know how to spend time with them and use them for the right purpose.
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