Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays,
children
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are matured in
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conditions.
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,
TV
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, mobile phones or computers are so familiar with them.
However
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, people hold different about whether reading
stories
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from a book brings benefits. While some claim that watching
TV
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or playing video
games
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is better, I partly agree that reading
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a book
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is a good
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but sometimes
children
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can watch
TV
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or
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games
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to relax and have to be under the control of their
parents
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. On the one hand,
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watching
TV
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or playing computer
games
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is not really bad if
parents
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always take care
their
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children
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.
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,
children
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can watch
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or
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games
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about
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15-20 minutes
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after
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school time as long as we don’t abuse them. According to my,playing video
games
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can help
children
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solve some problems better which can transfer into real life and learn more social knowledge while watching
TV
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such
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as YOUTUBE, HTV, VTV7, NATIONAL GEOGRAPHIC,DISNEY CHANNEL,… That can help
children
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impove
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improve
their English.
Parents
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should be an
intructor
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instructor
and pay attention to
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children’entertainment
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children entertainment
activites
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activities
, watching
TV
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or playing
games
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is no longer a bad
habit
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and can not affect to student achievement.
On the other hand
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, I support the idea that reading
stories
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books
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is
better
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a better
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and a good
habit
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.Studies
shown
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that
parents
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should read
books
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to
children
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when they are only a few months old.
This
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will create a
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of reading
books
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everyday
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,
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concentration of
children
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.
Beside
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that ,reading
books
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helps improve reading and writing ability, stimulate the imagination and remember longer.
For example
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, we can read
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books
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with
children
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to keep them motivated, we can ask them various funny questions
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to the
books
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which
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improves
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focus
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the focus
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of
children
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and remember
their
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the
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stories
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that they have read or
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listened
listen
. In conclusion, reading
books
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is definitely a good
habit
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which cannot be denied.
Beside
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that watching
TV
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or playing computer
games
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will bring benefits if we know how to spend time with them and use them for the right purpose.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Imagination
  • Visualization
  • Complex vocabulary
  • Sentence structure
  • Focus
  • Concentration
  • Passive activity
  • Interactive activity
  • Gratification
  • Diverse perspectives
  • Cultural perspective
  • Historical perspective
  • Attention span
  • Educational enrichment
  • Cognitive development
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