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Some countries are struggling with increases in crime rates. Some believed that having more police on the streets is the best way to reduce and combat crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Over the past few decades
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some countries have had difficulty controlling criminal activities. While some people suggest that ,an increase in the number of defence officers on the roads can reduce the crime rate. I partially agree with
this
 because rising
police
 means lower crime and
also
 need to create public awareness as well.
To begin
 with, there are some individuals who strongly believe that only
police
 forces can play
effective
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 role
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 jurisdiction of illegal activities.
For example
, during the high alert situation in Washington DC, the national defence service would mobilise extra
police
 officers to
control
 the hazardous situation within a limited time they
control
 everything.
Furthermore
, when a nation has more army force, it will be easier to
control
 every lawbreaker work as well as they can solve the cases on schedule.
For instance
, in Belgium increases policemen and policewomen in order to
control
 offensive work.
As a result
, the percentage of wrong deeds are going low day by day.
However
,
on the other hand
, to
control
 the movement of delinquents, the government should launch
a
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 awareness campaign in social media and in schools about the dangerous situation as well as the higher officials should offer the people to attain free self-defence workers . It
also
 has
also
have
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 long-run effects and
also
 helps to create a safe environment.
Hence
, in Korea, it is mandatory to get defence training
thus
, people can protect themselves by waiting for the
police
. To conclude, it is undeniable
police
 are playing a significant role to reduce crimes as well as we
also
 need to learn how to protect ourselves
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