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You have been assigned to give a networking presentation with your colleague from a different office, who you met last year. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter: • Inform your colleague that you will be working together. • Provide your initial ideas on the networking presentation. • Ask for a time to meet and practice the presentation.

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Dear
Ms.
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 Petitto, I am very
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glad
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 to express my feelings that we are working together on
networking
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a networking
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presentation
. We met
last
 year
on
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at
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annual
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the annual
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 function of
company
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the company
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 and I am very well aware
about
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 your expertise in communication. My idea about
this
presentation
 is to structure it
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three
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phase
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 from beginner, intermediate to advance level of networking skills with some motivational examples and
an
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audience interaction at the end of each level.
Moreover
, we could elaborate the power of
thenetworking
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the networking
networking
 in every field from a business to politics with the help of
video
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a video
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presentation
 that we could shoot before the day of the
presentation
. For the preparation for
final
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 day, we should meet and practice the
presentation
, for me, the
next
 weekdays are best to do it, if you want to change it, you kindly suggest your
convenience
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 date and we can meet at our company auditorium for
this
 purpose, as that place is the best for practice, because we are going to perform in
this
 auditorium at
upcoming
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the upcoming
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 annual function of
company
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. See you soon. Yours mate, Harpreet Sangha
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