some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. what is your opinion.

In the present day, there are many advanced technologies that
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been developed, and many of the technologies
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developed to make our life easier than before.
However
, it is undeniable that some of these technologies especially A.I
robots
come to replace us in many
jobs
,
such
as service
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,
lawyer
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,
driver
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, or even medical
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. The following paragraph will be discussing my perspective.
Therefore
, the conclusion has been reached.
To begin
with, from my perspective I cannot entirely agree with the statement because there are some
jobs
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by A.I
robots
. The
first
example is engineering
jobs
, I believe that
this
job cannot be replaced by A.I
robots
due to that engineering
jobs
need more than the knowledge in
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field, it needs to has creative thinking and improvise thinking that A.I
robots
are not good as humans, and
finally
for why engineering
jobs
will not be replaced by A.I
robots
which
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engineering
jobs
is the field that
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the
robots
, so the
robots
still need engineers to fix their errors or problems.
Moreover
, other
jobs
that I believe that it will not be replaced by the
robots
are architect, singer, actor and actress because all of these
jobs
require highly creative thinking and emotion in their works and the
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reason
that why
robots
cannot take over all of these
jobs
is due to that the
robots
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logical thinking and others
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follow the order that has been assigned. They do not have
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thinking only a number for them to use. In summary, the former and latter
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have already provided the reasons and examples from my point of view.
However
, I believe that some
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jobs
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should be taken by the
robots
such
as construction
worker
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,
accountant
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, or plants worker
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the A.I
robots
have a percentage for making a mistake lower than humans.
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  • artificial intelligence (AI)
  • automation
  • robotics
  • futuristic developments
  • analyze data
  • analytical precision
  • human capabilities
  • emotional intelligence
  • human interaction
  • human oversight
  • strategic decision-making
  • nuances of human judgment
  • technological landscape
  • intrinsic human qualities
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