Nowadays,families are not as close as in the past and a lot of people have become used to this.why is this happening?do the advantages of this trend outweigh the drawbacks?

In

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modern era, most people do not live with their close family circle due to technology and

industralization

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industrialization

. Countless families are not

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as strong as

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past because they like to move to

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for education, work

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. In

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essay, I will discuss is

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trend gives benefits or drawbacks? I think

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trend has more negatives than positives for the following reasons.

To begin

with, there are many drawbacks are available in

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process. One of the major negatives is when

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people live not close to their loved ones while they will be

fraustrated

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, they will more suffer to any mental illness

such

as depression and stress. Another disadvantage is they will be

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from

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society as well as their families because they would not like to visit directly to their loved ones and they like to contact with social

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media

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medias

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,

as a result

, they do not close with them.

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, a recent report by

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court said that more than 60% of

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divorce cases reason is

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addicted

social

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and misuse,

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chatting

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their partners too.

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,

this

distance always

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trouble.

Conversely

, one of the benefits is reducing the conflict between

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genertaion

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generation

generations

and younger because they do not maintain

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relationship

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. When they talk face-to-face while may be brought some conflict but

this

way you do not face any troubles between them. Another positive is avoiding

home sickness

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when they are staying in

any

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abroad nation, if a person not close to their family members, he would not be suffered

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,

thus

he can live with happy.

For instance

, a recent report by the world migrants organisation said by more than 80% of the migrants are being lived very

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even they live alone. To conclude, using technology and education, work these are the main reason for the population are not being closed with their relatives. Reducing

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conflict and

home sickness

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is the main advantages of

this

process, being

isolation

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and

strees

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stress

trees

is the negatives of

this

.

However

, In my opinion, about

this

,

this

trend has more

disadvandages

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disadvantages

outweigh the advantages. I hope the public should

be maintain

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a close relationship with their relatives in order to

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any problems.