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Music is a great way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

#music #people #cultures #ages
There are various forms of
music
 that are liked by people as per their
interest
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.
Music
is not only acts
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 as a
divrsional
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diversional
divisional
 therapy but is a stress buster too. It gives positive vibes and refreshes the day. I strongly believe that
music
 aids in connecting people of different cultures and ages. For an instance, the
gynecologist
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advises
advices
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 the pregnant lady to
listen
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 soothing
music
 after weeks of gestation so that a good connection
is build
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 between the mother and fetus and that somehow helps in
neural
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the neural
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 development of
fetus
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the fetus
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. Moving
further
, when a child starts learning
music
 from an institute the learning process makes
good
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a good
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 connection between the trainer and the student of different age
group
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. They enjoy each other company while practising
music
.
Likewise
,
music
 acts as a bond between different cultures.
For example
,
now a days
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 new songs are released where
collaboration
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the collaboration
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 of Punjabi and Haryanvi languages can be seen. The common practice is observed during recent years is the rap songs in which
hindi
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Hindi
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,
english
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 and other local languages and noticed describing
about
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the tradition and cultural practices followed in
paricular
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particular
 regions. To sum up, I concluded that
music
 has its own magic in the air that sets connections between cultures and people irrespective of their ages.
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