Inventors are not as important to society as doctors. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Provide reasons for your answer. Include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

At present, all the occupations are equally valued yet, there are few presumptions
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for the latest discoveries we would still be suffering
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polio.
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no medical assistance lives would be severely devastated. So
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is important.
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invaluable due to the fact that they are what
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helps us to perform daily routines at ease.
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, they raise the scope of knowledge of various things which we were unaware of in the past decades
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magnets, chemicals and space.
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intelligence can be utilised in various other roles as well.
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, vaccination is the great discovery ever made
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date.
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, they proved to be life saviours for a stake of people right from their invention.
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humans as they provide cures for a plethora of diseases.
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, they are the persons anyone would visit during a medical crisis.
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, they help us to be immune enough as a precaution to various health issues beforehand by means of
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supplements. To illustrate it
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, a Prime Minister of India who is the most critical person for the country suffered from a heart stroke.
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, it is due to the aid of the doctors and their
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he survived it and performs his activities at comfort now. To conclude, every occupation is as crucial as the others are. No occupation alone can provide significant helpful outputs to the nation. Most of the jobs go hand in hand and so are Inventors and Doctors. Neither of them can be overvalued or undervalued.
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