In the future, we will have more and more leisure time as machines will replace many of the tasks we do at home and work now. Discuss the benefits this will bring and also the problem it will cause. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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human
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spend
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extracurricular
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themself
themselves
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cybercrime
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this
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leaked
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becomes
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intelligent
intelligence
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put
work
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perticular
those persons who Correct your spelling
particular
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take
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to take
role
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the role
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a very
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introduce
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introducing
technology
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