You have been offered a job that will require you to move to a city that you have never visited before. You have a friend who lives there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, Explain your situation, Say why you feel unsure about living in the city Ask some questions about life in the city.

Hello Amanda, I hope you are well. I just received
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wonderfull
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wonderful
news about the job which I attended an interview
last
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week. I was approved for the manager role that I've been aiming
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a long time. I'm excited
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this
opportunity,
however
, I need to move from Florianópolis to your city São Paulo. Changing city makes me feel insecure, I have never lived in
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than Florianópolis. I heard that São Paulo has high numbers of violence in some regions and the public transportation is not so good. As you know, I don't have
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licence, so I really need to count on quick and safe
transporation
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transportation
between my home and work,
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I'll need to live near to the office
in
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downtown. Do you know if
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Pequena
neighborhood
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is near
to
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Downtown? I was looking for apartments to live in
this
area. Do you know if
this
place is safe, even at night? In
this
new job, I believe it will be necessary to make extra work hours and I don't want to be in
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while returning
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home. Thank you in advance for providing me
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this
information. I really appreciate your support. Warm regards, Evelyn
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