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Some people believe that the unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example, working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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High school is a fundamental part
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 the formation of many
people
. What we learn and experience here might stay for the rest of our lives and be the reason for making decisions later as an adult.
This
 is why it is important to
recieve
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receive
 relevant information about different fields of life, not only
theorical
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theoretical
. Doing community service can be relevant for students to complement their subjects with practice, to make them aware of
people
's reality and keep them busy during free
time
.
First
, working for the wellness of the community can make them getting conscious about how anybody can cause an improvement in the town by sharing some of their free
time
.
This
 will create a sense of
responsability
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responsibility
 and will make them emphatic about the needs of the town. To help
improving
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 a
neighborhood
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 can make a person understand how some
people
 live and the struggles they con have to go through
everyday
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. For a city to grow
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 important that all members supported each other and become stronger together.
Second
, to do different tasks and to be part of social groups oriented to a good cause can avoid
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on
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 criminal activities or in the consuming of alcohol and drugs. Staying busy and interacting with more
people
 interested
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 doing goods will reduce the
posibility
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possibility
 of wasting their
time
. Teaching sports to children is a good way to relax, stay in shape and create a safe hobby for kids. To sum up, community service should be
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 during high school to show the students how to be useful in a social group and how
this
 is a good way to use free
time
 and
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wasting
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 it on wrong activities.
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