You are interested in applying for a new position at your company but have some questions. Write a letter to you boss. In your letter include: Which position you are considering What questions you have about it How your boss can help you decide whether or not to apply

Dear
Mr.
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Roy, I am writing
this
letter in relation to the vacancy that emerged recently in our organisation. I came to know about the opening through the HR team. When I did cross-check the job description I really thought that It completely matches
to
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my profile. The
role
is for HR coordinator of
MEP
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team at
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Infopark
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branch. Though the opportunity seems to be quite catchy, I have some doubts relating to it. It has been stated in the job ad that the contracted fortnightly hours
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30 hours, which seems quite less for the
role
, as it's
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demanding job.
Similarly
, the posting is at
quite
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busy location, which would rather require a long commute time.
Hence
, travel allowance has not been mentioned. Even though I have certain questions in my mind for the
role
. I do certainly think that I would make a suitable candidate for
this
position, as I am working as
HR
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administrator at the moment. I would be really thankful to you
,
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if you would consider my profile and give me
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an
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advice on it. If I should apply for
this
role
or not. I hope to hear from you soon regarding
this
. Yours sincerely, Neethu Babu
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