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teachers think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Do you think its advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

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Dear Sir, I am writing to inform you regarding the talk to
students
 about crime and safety . As president of the student council,I have decided the date 20th December 2021 on Friday. The chosen place is my school. Sir, all preparations are already done.
Students
 are taking part with much enthusiasm and excitement. Your kind presence as a guest will make the evening more special and informative. Kindly, make out some time and appear as an
honorable
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 guest.
This
 will privilege our event and make the event more spectacular and special.The event will be from 8 pm to 10 pm. We know that you may be busy , as the local chief but without your presence and your motivational words, our lecture will be incomplete. We hope that you will not disappoint the
students
. It would
also
 be a sort of happiness for the teachers of the school. We guess that you will keep the excitement and enthusiasm of
students
 high and will attend there. It would be our pleasure for you to come. With kind regards president of the student council Kamelia Zareva
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