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The bar charts below give information on road transport in a number of European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar charts below give information on road transport in a number of European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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table we have information about transportation using quantity
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number of European countries.
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 travel by carThe highest commuting time belongs to the UK which means that using both ways quantity is 40.
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,In Italy commuting time is so lower than
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 with a figure approximately 26 times lower than in Germany.Probably, the average of using both ways rate in Europe is 30.
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