Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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These days, scientific
research
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including academic journals are more influential for us. Many
people
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think that
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information is better to share with other
people
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. Some of them said it isn’t fair to share freely with others.
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, there are positives and negatives in these trends. In
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essay, I will examine the benefits and drawbacks of sharing free for scientific
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including all academic journals. On the
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side of
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This
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research
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means massive knowledge. Many students, including
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,
use
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it to study. Some students
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it to understand more while learning in both school or university as well as
scientists
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use
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it for
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in the lab. These papers can give them as a guide to apply in their work in the future.
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, other
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should reach these papers too.
Research
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articles are the new things
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just occur. Some incidents
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should know to prepare themselves.
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, virus covid19, there are various types of
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to choose
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Maybe, these articles can help them make decisions easier. Turning to the other side of the argument.
Scientists
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and authors who write their journals put a lot of effort, money and time
for
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writing
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article. Some authors
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their money to work
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their
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. They waste a lot of time, some
people
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use
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for years for
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journal. They should receive an
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like
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for sharing it
to
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apply
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worldwide.
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, copyright always occurs when they share it for free.
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innovation or technology in
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can be copied by competitors. It can be
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easily shortcut.
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,
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year my supervisor worked in the lab in my company. I helped him with
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project.
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the project finished clearly, He told me
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paper couldn’t show everywhere without request. To conclude, Making the
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is never easy. While it should be sharing for
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students
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and other
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new knowledge and help them
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,
scientists
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put a lot of effort into them. In my opinion, it cannot be said that
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outweigh
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the other.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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