Many children today find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention at school. What could you think are the main causes? What are the possible solutions?

Nowadays, it is difficult for many

children

to stay

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at

schools

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. In

this

essay, I will examine two main causes of

this

issue, and propose some possible solutions.

Firstly

, one of the main causes which reduce

children

's concentration is that some parents allow their kids

play

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mobiles phone too much. Obviously, when kids are playing more online games or watching VDO clips, they will pay attention to study lesser.

Nevertheless

, the possible solution to solve

this

is limiting the spending of time on using mobile devices.

Moreover

, parents should encourage their

children

to do more social

activities

than playing electronic devices.

Consequently

,

this

will help

children

to be more

focus

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at

schools

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.

Secondly

, another main cause of

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children

from

schools

is that there are so many attractive

activities

.

For example

, some teenagers found that they would rather

going

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surfing than

studying

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study

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in the classroom.

Therefore

, they prefer surfing the internet all the time.

Nonetheless

, the possible solution to fix it is not

allow

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them

using

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any mobile device during the class. While promoting

the

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physical fun

activities

such

as football, basketball, etc. is necessary to draw their attention, and it will improve their ability to focus. In conclusion, it is undeniable that many

children

today are hard to concentrate

to

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the classroom.

Although

this

may cause by using too

much

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devices and being easier to access interesting

activities

,

schools

and parents can fix

this

problem by

limit

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limiting

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the

using

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time of mobile phones as well as not

allow

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then

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them

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to use

it

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them

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in lecture rooms.