some people think that only the government can make significant changes in society, while others think that individuals can have a lot of influence. What is your opinion.

it has been argued that

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integral variation can be done only by the

regime

in the

community

.

however

,

other

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oppose

this

and say inhabitants

also

have a big impact

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such

changes. in my opinion, I think both views are

intercorelated

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intercorrelated

interrelated

. to explain

this

, I will discuss my viewpoints in upcoming paragraphs.

to begin

with, many

people

say that important steps should be taken by the authority to make changes in

the

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society

.

firstly

, it is true that the

regime

plays an important role in our

society

. the meaning of "government" is to govern the

community

, the country.

secondly

,

eveyone

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everyone

abide

the

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rules

implemented by the management and no one can deny

to follow

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these

rules

.

for

example

, traffic

rules

,

rules

to control the pollution, and some new

rules

like

cerfwes

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curfews

at night,in which teenagers cannot go outside without any supervision or parents.

hence

,

regime

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have

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the power to control the country and

society

as well.

Moreover

, the

ministery

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ministry

minister

helps everyone in different ways for

people

's daily expenses . to cite an

example

for

this

, pensions for

widow

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and older , in

this

way they can

fulfill

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their daily needs.

as a result

, the administration

do

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a lot for the

community

. on

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other hand side, individuals should

also

think about their locality.

first

of all, local

people

also

have

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significant importance for their

society

,

for

example

, to make changes

such

as to decrease the

illetracy

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illiteracy

rate they can do volunteer work to teach the poor children.

in addition

,they should be encouraged for higher studies to set an

example

and stay away from bad companies.

last

but not least, participating in social activities,like opening charitable can help the needy ones and

also

by providing free medication to poor

people

.

thus

, in

this

way

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everyone

play

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an important role in their

community

. in conclusion, it has been noticed that, apart from the government, local dwellers

also

plays

crucial

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role

for

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their

society

. and in my opinion, both

regime

and

people

are

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correlated

with each other, as government implement the law and

people

follow them. so,

its

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just a way of thinking. but everyone

have

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their own importance according to their field.