some people think that only the government can make significant changes in society, while others think that individuals can have a lot of influence. What is your opinion.

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integral variation can be done only by the

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oppose

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and say inhabitants

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have a big impact

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such

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changes. in my opinion, I think both views are

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with, many

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say that important steps should be taken by the authority to make changes in

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society

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, it is true that the

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plays an important role in our

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. the meaning of "government" is to govern the

community

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, the country.

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everyone

abide

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rules

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implemented by the management and no one can deny

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to control the pollution, and some new

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like

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curfews

at night,in which teenagers cannot go outside without any supervision or parents.

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regime

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have

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the power to control the country and

society

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as well.

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, the

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helps everyone in different ways for

people

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's daily expenses . to cite an

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for

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and older , in

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way they can

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their daily needs.

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a lot for the

community

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other hand side, individuals should

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think about their locality.

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of all, local

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significant importance for their

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, to make changes

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as to decrease the

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illiteracy

rate they can do volunteer work to teach the poor children.

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,they should be encouraged for higher studies to set an

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and stay away from bad companies.

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but not least, participating in social activities,like opening charitable can help the needy ones and

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by providing free medication to poor

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everyone

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an important role in their

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. in conclusion, it has been noticed that, apart from the government, local dwellers

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their

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. and in my opinion, both

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and

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are

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with each other, as government implement the law and

people

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follow them. so,

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just a way of thinking. but everyone

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their own importance according to their field.