Write about the following topic. It has been argued that giving gifts to friends and family should not be encouraged, because money is often wasted on things that people do not like or want. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Gifts

are always given more happiness than anything because

this

can create more

expeectation

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expectation

expectations

and joyful moments too.

However

, some say

thay

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that

they

giving

gifts

cultures should be avoided due to

waste

of money and

reciever

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receiver

does not like and expect. I strongly disagree with

this

statement for the following reasons.

To begin

with, undoubtedly

gifts

can

gives

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more pleasure to giver as well as

receiver

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a receiver

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too.

In other words

,

this

culture can create a pleasant situation while giving prize moments, countless people are still now expected

prize

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prizes

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from their loveable persons.

For example

,

Indian

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in Indian

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wedding culture friends and families are given blessings with some valuable

gifts

such

as Jewellery, household things to bride and groom,

as a

result

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they can feel very cheerful at that

moments

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moment

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certainly giving

gifts

is not a

waste

of capital

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in contrast

this

gives more happiness.

Moreover

, giving

gifts

can provide

a

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apply

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precious

memories

to

receiver

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the receiver

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, they can remember easily when they see a

gift

. To be more precise, a

gift

can bring

a

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an

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unforgetable

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unforgettable

memory about

giving

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a giving

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person,

hence

countless folks are given

gifts

for any

functions

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function

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.

For instance

, giving

plant

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a plant

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as a

gift

is a new trend among the population,

this

gift

certainly

bring

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brings

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more valuable

memories

in lifelong and

this

is

a

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unforgetable

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unforgettable

gift

too.

In addition

, people

also

like to

recive

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receive

any

kinds

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kind

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of

gifts

from their relatives and friends too. Obviously,

this

tendancy

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tendency

gives a lot of

memories

so money is not a

waste

when they buy a

gift

, it is always precious. To conclude, prize and

gifts

is a valuable thing among the population, they are expected too,

therefore

money

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the money

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is not a

waste

when giving

gifts

.

Hence

, I strongly agree with

this

statement in the above-mentioned details. I hope

this

process is conducive to bringing happiness and

memories

.