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Many museums and historical sites are mostly visited by foreign tourists, but not local people. Why do you think it happens? What can be done to attract local visitors to these sites?

#museums #sites #tourists #people #visitors
The pie chart illustrates, percentage of Anthropology degree holders that work
in particular
 areas after 5
years
. In the table, it gives us the information about the salary scale of same graduates after 5
years
. (Freelance consultant, Government and Private Sector) Overall, the majority of university pass-out student’s work in a full-time job and a small proportion follow postgraduate studies with or without part-time jobs while the similar group doesn’t have records. In terms of salary scales of majority employed earn over $100 thousand on freelancing and government jobs while private companies larger percentage earn bit lower salaries. After 5
years
 52 % of graduates are working as a Full timer’s and 5% follow postgraduates while earning from part-time jobs. Respectively 8% of students
are follow
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are following
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 full-time postgraduates and similar
group
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 are unknown. 40% of Freelancers and 50% of government employees
are earn
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 more than $100,000 of income after 5
years
 while 35% of private workers earn around $50,000-74,999 as their salaries.
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