Some people think that childcare centers provide the best services for children of preschool age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that day-care services bring preschoolers the best things which are crucial for their ages, while others believe that family

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will be suitable.

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essay will discuss both views and agree with the former points. There are two key reasons why busy parents want their

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to be looked after by their family

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compelling justification is that

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have more experience in raising small children, so they know what needs to be done to make

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better.

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the reason why in Vietnam, there are more and more multigenerational families where parents and their children’s families live together. Another benefit worth mentioning is that family

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will take more care of

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. To be specific, in preschools, there are a lot of toddlers;

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, it is difficult for teachers to take notice of all of them.

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have more time to take care of

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, especially when feeding them.

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, taking preschoolers to childcare c

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has its own merits.

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and foremost, day-care services provide toddlers with a good environment to enhance their aptitudes and interact with each other at the same age. There is research indicating that those children listening to a lot of baby talk are talking more than the babies to more adult talks and standard speech since frequent baby talk has dramatically boosted vocabulary.

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, going to childcare c

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will provide small children

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arge range of opportunities to expand their imagination and social skills.

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is because kindergarteners usually celebrate interesting outside activities which is an ideal chance for

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to meet their counterparts and improve soft skills

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as teamwork and language development. In conclusion,

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family

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have more experience and time to take care of

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, I support that day-care services are better because of i

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convenient environments to contact with each other,

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and improve their social skills and creativity.