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Many people believe that it's better to learn something in a group rather than individually. Do you agree or disagree?

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A number of
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 believe that learning a new skill on their own helps them find their own pace and progress, while others argue that
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classes
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 are a better option to do so. I am in full agreement with the latter because it is more fun, as well as budget-friendly to join the
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classes
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, and still achieve the goal of learning something. Acquiring a new skill in the learning
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 is very much enjoyable which encourages
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 to feel motivated to continue pursuing. In
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classes
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, we will be learning with other
people
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 who have the same interest;
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 allows us to gain knowledge not only from the tutor alone but
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 from the
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 members. I am an example of
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 myself. I attended a Japanese language
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 in a classroom of about fifteen
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. The interactive
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 activities gave me opportunities to practise my speaking skill and learn from each other's mistakes. Team learning is a great option for
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 who want to enhance their skills and have a budget constraint. One-to-one teaching usually costs much higher due to the flexibility in scheduling and
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 in learning progress. For those who are unaffordable to pay more in return for flexibility,
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 courses make a better choice.
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, my friend wanted to have a crash course on a programming language recently but the individual
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 would cost her almost triple the amount that
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 offered. As she was low on her savings, she decided to join the
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 course
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. In conclusion, I believe that attending mass
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 are a better option, for it not only motivates us throughout our learning journey but the tuition fee is
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 wallet-friendly.

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • collaborative environment
  • discussion
  • debate
  • exchange of ideas
  • critical soft skills
  • communication
  • teamwork
  • leadership
  • emotional and motivational support
  • isolating
  • personalized pace
  • efficient learning
  • self-discipline
  • accountability
  • educational progress
  • distractions
  • group dynamics
  • commitment
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