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Nowadays many people choose to be self- employed rather than to work for a company or organisation .why might this be the case? What could be the advantages and disadvantages of being self-employed?

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The employment desires of
people
 have been changed.
Consequently
, the majority have of
people
 have chosen
the
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self-employment over salaried jobs. In my view,
this
 trend will reduce the number of job seekers in the market.
Although
,
this
 option beneficial
people
 with
a
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considerable
freedom
 and a higher
profit
, even with the significant risk and responsibilities. The increasing number of self-employment will limit the experienced and qualified job applicants in the market.
Therefore
, companies will be unable to achieve the expected
profit
 margins with those
lower skilled
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 employees.
For instance
, WSO2, a software company, had to fill their product manager position only from 3 applicants. I believe being
self-
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 entrepreneur will facilitate
people
 with more
freedom
 and higher profits. After initiating your own income source, you will be your own boss.
Thus
, you can manage your
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wok
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 life and personal life more efficiently, and
this
 will create more
freedom
 to make your own decisions.
In addition
,
this
 will
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results
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 you
to earn
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 profits rather than a regulated salary.
In contrast
,
thorough
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 contributing a significant effort, you can rise up your income. My husband is a freelance creative designer and he earns twice as much as my monthly salary, even with
the
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more
freedom
.
On the other hand
, high risk and
the
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unlimited responsibilities are the two main drawbacks of being self-employed. You always have to bear the losses as well as the profits.
Moreover
, you have to tolerate the impact which could be occurred due to
sudden
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 crisis situation, like
COVID
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 pandemic or a heart attack. For
an
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example, my uncle lost his garment business due to an unexpected blood clot inside his brain. In conclusion, the trend of being self-employed has increased within the recent past. In my opinion,
this
 will
be negatively influence
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to
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the
profit
 of the companies and
organization
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organizations
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.
Nevertheless
,
people
 will acquire more
freedom
 and higher
profit
 margins through self-employment even with the high risk and responsibilities.
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