In some countries young people are encouraged to work or to travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss and advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

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is important in everyone life's and it's

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ray of hope to get success in future. In few

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people motivates youth to do

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or travel annually in mid of completing higher

education

and in the

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initial

stage of the University.

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essay will discuss both the Advantages and Disadvantages of the young generation who accept

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challenges. There are many benefits of working or travelling before

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for university.

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, earning money for the family.

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them in contributing their share financially and act as

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family support. So, there is no financial burden on the head of the family member,

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as that money can be used for daily

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maintenance

and in that way other siblings will

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get an

oppurtunity

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opportunity

to pursue the study.

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habit

of working

also

help them to become independent. It

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youth

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dependent on others after some age.In future, they can manage

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everything by themself.

For example

,travelling alone in the

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public

transport and deciding what is rights and wrong for future and

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prepare their mind to stay alone

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in the

hostel and doing

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daily

chores by self.

On the other hand

, the cons of working and travelling is that interest

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studying vanishes. When youth work in between their studies they are bound to get distracted from

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their

study and they put more concentration on work.

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, sometimes they leave the study in order to work and earn

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money to

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their dreams .

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, they will not get

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job

due to the gap in studies which has

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impact on the

pusuing

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pursuing

desire

job

and salary. To illustrate, In

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recruiter do not give placement

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to the young those who

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no continuation in the

education

. To conclude,there are

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negative and positive points, young generation

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their family members and not to be dependent. Alternatively,that put down the

ineterest

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interest

of studying as well gap shows no continuation of

education

leading to no jobs .