some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools, others however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Either mixed
schools
or single schools
are a hotly-debated topic that often divides opinion.Nevertheless
,some say it is of preference to educate boys and girls in distinct schools
while it is imperative taking part in mixed schools
.I will elaborate on both statements and accord my opinion.
First
of all, separate schools
offer students
an opportunity to compete with each other of the same sex
,which makes learning more competitive ,moreover
, increases self-confidence.In, addition there is no distraction
from other sex
which is indispensable for the students
to concentrate and perform excellently in schools
.Research has found that in
Rwanda, where all Change preposition
apply
schools
are separate is most visited by multiple countries for benchmarking because of the great performance of schools
.On the other
hand
separate Add a comma
,hand
schools
students
less understand the world such
that when they finish school, they are the most who go astray because they are not exposed.Consequently
, there is no distraction
and competation
among Correct your spelling
competition
same
Add a hyphen
same-sex
sex
is well established
Secondly
,mixed schools
have merit and demerits.Sexual distraction
is such
a drawback in mixed schools
such
that it probably end up developing into a relationship among students
which deter the performance of the students
however
in spite of this
there is an opportunity to socialized as it facilitates student be
at a position to tackle life outside world Add the particle
to be
unlike
others .Add the comma(s)
,unlike
Furthermore
,bullying is also
very common in mixed schools
especially
for Add the comma(s)
,especially
the
shy Correct article usage
apply
students
.In addition
,competition is at the top notch
as in which Add a hyphen
top-notch
sex
will be leading the class performance such
that every student will be on toes to get better marks. For this
reason
the dismay of performing unsuccessfully is high in Add a comma
,reason
amixed
school.
To conclude, Correct your spelling
a mixed
mixed
schools
is an environment for learning and improving skill
but all distracters should be controlled by the management.Fix the agreement mistake
skills
However
, separate schools
give an opportunity for a student to concentrate fully without distraction
from outside
world.Add an article
the outside
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