some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools, others however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Either mixed
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or single
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are a hotly-debated topic that often divides opinion.
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,some say it is of preference to educate boys and girls in distinct
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while it is imperative taking part in mixed
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.I will elaborate on both statements and accord my opinion.
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of all, separate
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offer
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an opportunity to compete with each other of the same
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,which makes learning more competitive ,
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, increases self-confidence.In, addition there is no
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from other
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which is indispensable for the
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to concentrate and perform excellently in
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.Research has found that
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Rwanda, where all
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are separate is most visited by multiple countries for benchmarking because of the great performance of
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.
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separate
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students
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less understand the world
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that when they finish school, they are the most who go astray because they are not exposed.
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, there is no
distraction
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and
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competition
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sex
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is well established
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,mixed
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have merit and demerits.Sexual
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is
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a drawback in mixed
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such
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that it probably end up developing into a relationship among
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which deter the performance of the
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however
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in spite of
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there is an opportunity to socialized as it facilitates student
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at a position to tackle life outside world
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others .
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,bullying is
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very common in mixed
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especially
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for
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shy
students
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.
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,competition is at the
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as in which
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will be leading the class performance
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that every student will be on toes to get better marks. For
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reason
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the dismay of performing unsuccessfully is high in
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a mixed
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school. To conclude,
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is an environment for learning and improving
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but all distracters should be controlled by the management.
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, separate
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give an opportunity for a student to concentrate fully without
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from
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world.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • co-education
  • gender segregation
  • peer pressure
  • academic performance
  • gender stereotypes
  • discrimination
  • social skills
  • teamwork
  • collaboration
  • diversity
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