some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools, others however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Either mixed

schools

or single

schools

are a hotly-debated topic that often divides opinion.

Nevertheless

,some say it is of preference to educate boys and girls in distinct

schools

while it is imperative taking part in mixed

schools

.I will elaborate on both statements and accord my opinion.

First

of all, separate

schools

offer

students

an opportunity to compete with each other of the same

sex

,which makes learning more competitive ,

moreover

, increases self-confidence.In, addition there is no

distraction

from other

sex

which is indispensable for the

students

to concentrate and perform excellently in

schools

.Research has found that

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Rwanda, where all

schools

are separate is most visited by multiple countries for benchmarking because of the great performance of

schools

.

On the other

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separate

schools

students

less understand the world

such

that when they finish school, they are the most who go astray because they are not exposed.

Consequently

, there is no

distraction

and

competation

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competition

among

same

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sex

is well established

Secondly

,mixed

schools

have merit and demerits.Sexual

distraction

is

such

a drawback in mixed

schools

such

that it probably end up developing into a relationship among

students

which deter the performance of the

students

however

in spite of

this

there is an opportunity to socialized as it facilitates student

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at a position to tackle life outside world

unlike

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others .

Furthermore

,bullying is

also

very common in mixed

schools

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for

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shy

students

.

In addition

,competition is at the

top notch

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as in which

sex

will be leading the class performance

such

that every student will be on toes to get better marks. For

this

reason

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the dismay of performing unsuccessfully is high in

amixed

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a mixed

mixed

school. To conclude,

schools

is an environment for learning and improving

skill

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but all distracters should be controlled by the management.

However

, separate

schools

give an opportunity for a student to concentrate fully without

distraction

from

outside

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world.