Ordinary people try to copy famous people either reading magazines or watching TV. What are the reasons of doing this. Do you think is it good idea to copy famous people.

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the ideal role model for every person. Meanwhile,
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their fashion from watching tv or social media.
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the beginning,
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many reasons for observing famous
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and for most, famous
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either is athletes,
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actors and so on. All
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are very conscious
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world to
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fit. Continuously,
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follow
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regular exercise for being fit and
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trend will
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day
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today
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, lots of gyms are open with lots of
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and many famous
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take
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of that gym. So,
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more go to
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because
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their
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but not least, some
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have habits of reading novels and blogs. In
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generation,
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mainly
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atheletes
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, icons and so on. And they prefer to read
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struggle. It should give lots of motivation to unfamous
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can follow them and involve
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life style
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life
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people
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can take it either good
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or
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people
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take it for benefits.
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become reduced and many
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stop
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and advertising manager should involve famous
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for stopping
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habits.
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,
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developed their personality because they can follow famous
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either
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of clothes and what brands
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cloths
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they wear mostly.
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has promoted
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their
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conclusion, it become very successful and
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beneficial
for
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as well as
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should develop and make their
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happier. somehow, they neglect
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habits and positive things can be developed.

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