In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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is quite easy, whether it is through
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or
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generation
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not indulge in the
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because online games & private channels have taken over it. Almost two decades ago,
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were more into reading a
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as there were no other alternatives to find out what is happening in
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society.
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channels that most of the tech
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read
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either online or on T.V.
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, old
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still prefer to feel the feeling of
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in their own language. But
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young generation
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not pay much attention to the
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. Since there are many entertainment options are available, youth opt for that rather than watching boring
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or reading it. One of the many causes is that
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some
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do not buy the
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thinking that they can watch
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on television. In
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, they
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do not
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of reading
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from the
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. Another thing is that online games and private channels
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as Netflix, apple tv, prime amazon, etc have more influence on
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generation that they do not find time from that to watch online
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either.
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, every
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channel has
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tactics to broadcast the
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, they will flash the
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with breaking
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and when you watch it, it is about
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topic
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not even
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seeing
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it. In conclusion, if
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their way of broadcasting and a family can encourage their kids from their childhood to watch or read the
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, youngsters will have new perceptions about it.
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