You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: give details of your study plans explain why you want to get a part-time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job

Dear Aseem, I am writing

this

letter to ask your help finding me a part-time job in Australia. I got

the

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apply

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admission

in

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Swinburne university for my

masters

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master's

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program which is a year and a half long course. I will have my orientation

next

month so I am going to travel there a week ahead so by the time my classes start, I can

adpat

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adapt

adopt

the

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new environment. It would be great if you can help me find a job which can help me pay my accommodation fees and utility bills monthly. As you know my financial situation at home, my uncle paid my education fees and

i

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do not want to burden him

for

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with

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my daily expenses. Since you are there for almost 5 years, you must be aware of the job portals through which I can apply or if you have

a contacts

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contacts

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who

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whom

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I can approach for the same. I look

foward

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forward

meeting

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you soon there. Bye.

Brijal

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Bridal

Brinjal