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Some people think that there are things individuals can do to help prevent global climate change, others believe that action by individuals is useless and irrelevant and that it is only governments and large business can make a difference. Discuss both views and opinions.

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Global warming is a crucial issue that has impacted every country around the
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. Some
people
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 think that only authority and big commerce can
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 situation, whereas I agree with those who think every single person can make
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. In
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 essay, I will elucidate both my view and my opinion, and the following examples will be provided to support my point of view.
To begin
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 with, on the one hand, some
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 think that most
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 who make climate
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 are large businesses, so only governments can be the only
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 to control them and
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 issue is too big to determine by individuals.
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, according to the latest survey conducted by Bangkok University, it has been revealed that 80% of
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 who are living in Chonburi and Rayong, which are the biggest industrial areas and have the most air pollution provinces in Thailand, think the state should launch regulations to strictly control those factories.
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, they
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 think that another important way is that government officers should be honest about their responsibility or corruption in order to examine the industries. Huge businesses are the biggest cause of climate
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,
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 the ministry can be the one who must play a major role to tackle
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 problem.
On the other hand
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, I agree with those who think every single person can make a difference in the global warming situation because they are more powerful if
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 has awareness and takes responsibility for our
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. It is clear that the population in
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 is more than the number of governments or industries,
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 if
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 helps to prevent climate
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such
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 as reusing, reducing, recycling or putting the waste in the right place, it would make the
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. I totally agree with the statement that
everyone
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 can
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world
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. In conclusion, I strongly believe that
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, every nation, every government and every private organisation should take responsibility together in order to protect the worst natural situations which might happen in the future.
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