You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In you letter: Explain why you want to work in the company's head office for six months. Say how your work could be done while you are away ask for his/her help in arranging it.
Dear Antony,
I have seen about
a
new project details in a company's official website, they will joint to other countries branches workers too. Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
Therefore
I would like to work
for six months in our head office in London.
You know very well about me, I have a good qualification with higher experience with
Change preposition
in
advertisement
field. Correct article usage
the advertisement
This
new project is related to advertisement so this
six month
working experience would be gotten more knowledge about that field. Add a hyphen
six-month
Therefore
, I would like to work
in a head office.
Tony is a replacer of my work
, this
means I have talked to him about my working details and he accepted to do in my all job at office for six months. I hope he will be done extra work
for me and you know he is a very active and deticated
person in my team, that's why I talked to him. I would be gratefulCorrect your spelling
dedicated
,
if you could be allowed me to do Remove the comma
apply
this
.
I am looking forward to your positive response as soon as possible.
Thanking you,
Your's faithfully,
Luna.Submitted by reanudeepan on
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- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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