You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In you letter: Explain why you want to work in the company's head office for six months. Say how your work could be done while you are away ask for his/her help in arranging it.

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Dear Antony, I have seen about

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new project details in a company's official website, they will joint to other countries branches workers too.

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I would like to

work

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for six months in our head office in London. You know very well about me, I have a good qualification with higher experience

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the advertisement

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field.

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new project is related to advertisement so

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six month

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working experience would be gotten more knowledge about that field.

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, I would like to

work

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in a head office. Tony is a replacer of my

work

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means I have talked to him about my working details and he accepted to do in my all job at office for six months. I hope he will be done extra

work

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for me and you know he is a very active and

deticated

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dedicated

person in my team, that's why I talked to him. I would be grateful

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if you could be allowed me to do

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. I am looking forward to your positive response as soon as possible. Thanking you, Your's faithfully, Luna.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

179 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

professional advancement
cross-cultural collaboration
headquarters/ head office
global perspective
remote work
temporary assignment
team dynamics
networking opportunities
cultural immersion
succession planning
collaborative tools
time zone coordination
corporate hierarchy
relocation logistics
work-life balance
multinational environment

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