Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?
The global climate is changed by human’s activities. There are many activities
affected
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that affected
environment
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the environment
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as,
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that is
a lot of actions from the government and other organization
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organizations
interested
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are interested
about
climate change, it will be a try to convert our future to be Change preposition
in
a
bright for a new generation.
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First
of all, people
should care and reconsider the usage of own
cars because a lot of there are generate dioxide Correct pronoun usage
their own
emission
every day. That may solve the problem of air pollution. Fix the agreement mistake
emissions
Secondly
, recycling should be integrated into our Correct your spelling
lifestyle
life style
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lifestyle
such
as in houses or in
work. Change preposition
at
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it
can solve some of Correct pronoun usage
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the problem
problem
with overconsumption with better approaches and technologies are developed. Fix the agreement mistake
problems
Thirdly
, every person can clear own
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their own
people
.
As a result
, the government should to
spread Change the verb form
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the
awareness Correct article usage
apply
between
a new generation by adding some topics Change preposition
to
such
as ways to a
protect our planet and the importance of the global environment. Correct article usage
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In addition
, individual societies can help to attracting
many of the voluntary to improve Change the verb form
attract
a
quality of life for the communities. Correct article usage
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Lastly
, understand
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the Change preposition
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people
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of using alternative sources of energy Add an article
the importance
such
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, solar Fix the agreement mistake
turbines
panel
and others should be encouraged.
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this
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dangerous
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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic
Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.
You essay structure should look something like this:
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – Problems
- Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- One of the first problems of the...
- Another problem that needs to be considered...
- A possible solution to this problem would be...
- One immediate practical solution is to...