Some people feel unsafe either staying at home or going out. What are the possible reasons for this? What can be done to address this issue? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Some
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believe that feel unsafe staying at
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or going out.I want to say every
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have individual sites,they think that how them comfortable and
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true.Have many negative and positive opinions and sites. For me,in my ,opinion staying at
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is the most unsafe and comfortable.You may do what you want.Sleeping,reading,playing video games or doing business at
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.
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easy to do.Watching any films,anime,serials sitting in your room.Eat any foods or if you not we will call to restaurants or Fast food,
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, KFC,MacDonald's,Burger King.I prefer watching anime because it helps your brain to imagine.You will feel more safe staying at
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.But have the
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site
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negative.Your relationship,friends,compact with
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,your body,you will be bigger and fat teenager
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affected to your healthy lifestyle.Communicate with
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be more badly and you stay alone. Going out is more unsafe than staying at
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.In , the world we see how
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kill another or different situations when
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die.If you live in a perfect country or city,where not crimping or nothing bad,but you wouldn’t have a guaranty.A possible site is a community with
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having more friends and doing sport or playing.
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healthy for your life and your brain.Our brain works when we do. In ,
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conclusion I will say that we didn’t know when we meet our creature and enjoy every moment.Stay at
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if you need,but no more than 2 days.To create and work,for your life,future and for your future family.Safe yourself and be careful.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Perceive
  • Threat
  • Crime
  • Fear
  • Accident
  • Natural disaster
  • Personal security
  • Trust
  • Authorities
  • Social isolation
  • Loneliness
  • Media
  • News coverage
  • Community safety measures
  • Personal security awareness
  • Transparency
  • Support networks
  • Community involvement
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