Some believe that students should begin learning a language very early in school while others think these subjects should be taught later. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
There is an opinion that
children
should start learning foreign languages
at a young age
, while
others believe that people
should study it later in life. Some people
claim that studying new material is easier in childhood, when the brain just starting to form a neural network, therefore
, they think that children
would catch languages
faster. However
, that statement is not scientifically proven, so people
assume that it is easier to learn a new language
in
an older Change preposition
at
age
when an individual already has experience. In my opinion, adults can faster learn a language
because of a longer attention span, experience and clear motivation.
Some people
think that learning a language
at a young age
is better. First of all, because those children
will already achieve high results when their peers will just start studying languages
. Secondly
, children
can study a foreign language
at the same time as a native, through interaction with an environment. For instance
, children
in bilingual families, in which parents speak at least two languages
on a daily basis, at the age
of 6 or 7 can easily communicate with their parents.
On the other hand
, some parents may start forcing their children
to study, and that pressure may harmfully affect children
's mental health. Therefore
, individuals should start learning languages
when they want to, therefore
they would have a clear motivation, and that is
actually a key to success. A grown person would understand the priorities and have a strict plan to reach a goal.
In conclusion, starting studying languages
earlier will lead to a result at a young age
. However
, it is important for children
to have free time, and studying new languages
in adulthood would be even easier because of the concentration that grown people
have. In my opinion, languages
should be learned at a more older age
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