In some countries, there are fewer young people who listen to or play classical music these days. Why is this? Should young people be encouraged to play or perform classical music?

In some regions, it is reported that the number of your age group playing or listening to classical

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has declined. The main rationale for

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problem is the development of newer

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and theirs popularity is rapidly increasing in today world. I believe that the encouragement to learn playing classical type is the positive step.

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positive step should be applied. The primary reason

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mentioned decline comes from the popularity of news

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and its attraction to

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generation. As people tend to seek

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something new, they might think that the old one is too traditional and less appealing to them.

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when new

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attract a significant amount of the society, they start to gain their popularity;

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will put an excessive focus on them and classical starts to

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its heat. Take a new genre of

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example, it could be clearly seen that the majority of

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keen on listening and rapping since there are more and more programs and rap songs

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on TV and social media. In my opinion, I suggest that the young should be encouraged to heritage old genres of

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, specifically classical by learning and playing them. If people keep ignoring that classical

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already has a tendency to be less used nowadays, it will soon disappear in our life in the near future.

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has always been considered as a culture;

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significantly important to

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its appearance for

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to know. Take playing

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instance, people still play it till now because the culture of playing it has been heritage from years to years. In conclusion, the reason leads to

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platy enjoy classical

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from the trend that newer

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are becoming more popular and attract a noticeable enjoyment.

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, encouraging the young to play classical is a positive step. I suggest that

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could be done by opening more classical playing

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classes, increasing the appearance of

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genre on TV, social media, etc.