Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or disagree? Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement?

Due to the increase in the elderly population, there has been a lot of discussions over the

retirement

age. A sizable group believe that having a fixed

retirement

age, irrespective of the duties they perform is unreasonable.

Therefore

, individuals should be entitled to receive the pension at

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of their life based on their line of duty. I totally agree with

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notion and substantiate my reasoning in the course of

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essay along with providing the details on the

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who should be a part of

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scheme.

To begin

with, having a flexible way to withdraw themselves from their existing job is crucial as the circumstance varies among the individuals

This

gives them the opportunity to plan their future.

For instance

, if the government passes a bill stating that the people can opt their

retirement

age from 60 to 70 years.

This

allows them to make a decision based on their current and future aspirations.

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employment

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with diverse physical activity,

such

as athletes. There is a constant demand

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physical strength and a high probability of weakening that strength

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the course of time.

Therefore

, it is vital for individuals in

this

career to retire before they face challenges with respect to their professional requirements.

In addition

to

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, doctors who spend their entire life dealing with

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stress of saving lives should

also

be a part of

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module. In conclusion, having a flexible option in terms of preference of

retirement

plan is practical and sensible. Professional that requires heavy physical and mental stability, choosing to leave work ahead of time is beneficial for both the organization and the individual making it a win-win situation.