In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside the vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

The

transport

services

are so significant for people. In

this

situation will be the future issue.

However

, the driver has become a crucial workforce if no more or insufficient it will be

worth

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. In

this

material will be discussed the disadvantages of

this

trouble.

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of all, Look at the

currently

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lifestyles. Which

is

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many crowed usually go

out side

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outside

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by the

transport

services

. It seems like it will be the

first

choice.

For instance

, Economies has lowed down which is many populate do not have enough money to be reached the cars. One of the reasons

this

service could be solved these complications. If the driverless situation has occurred considerable folk will get problems. On the one hand, the price is up

for

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day by day for the car parks.

Crowd

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decided to

using

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the

transport

services

is better, more convenient and

easily

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to accept that. The worse will happen with

office

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an office

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worker

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workers

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, who worked in the city area. I think that will be

struggle

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a struggle

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if those people had to go into the city with the

transport

services

it no available parking and no free.

On the other hand

,

however

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it would not have

acceptable

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by

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the people. The spots and cons are exactly along together but for

this

trouble have more the disadvantages than. It

also

causes to getting more traffic-jam. I strongly

this

situation could not

be happened

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. To sum up, I think

this

issue will not acceptable by popularity.

Thus

,

crowd

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the crowd

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must pay attention

on

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. and do not destroy the encouragement of the drivers.