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“Your first impressions when you meet someone are always right.” Do you agree with this statement?

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There is an opinion about the
first
 impression, some people keep saying that it is crucial to
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 a point of view about one from the
first
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Moreover
, it depends on a person and the situation you are in. I believe that a real opinion can be made after interaction between individuals. To give an illustration
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 I mean, let’s look at the different performances. There are varieties of couches on the Internet, who can teach you how to present yourself and to pull the wool over one's eyes.
As a result
, everybody can learn techniques of self-presentation and make a correct and appropriate effect.
However
, there are other approaches how to facilitate the truth about a person, which I would like to discuss.
For instance
, you should always remember that everybody is unique and has his or her own character and twist. If you want to make
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 correct choice you need to be open-minded and agree that you can make a mistake in order to get experience. I think the best way how to find
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 right person is to do something together and see how he or she deals with things and keeps promises. Overall, there are a lot of opportunities how to meet a good one.
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 of all, you should start communication, get
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 impression and after that experience some events together. I draw my opinion based on communication with others. Usually, as luck would have it, real people stay with me and others disappear.
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