Write about the following topic: Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the midst of
this
technology-driven global world,each and
everyone
have
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their own personal vlogs
in
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on
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social
media
platform.
Hence
,
everyone
used to follow the
celebrities
and
intrupt
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interrupt
their privacy by clicking their photographs and publishing
it
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them
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.Some believe that
these
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this
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all makes them fame more.
However
,in my opinion,
people
should not do so.
Everyone
have
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has
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their own personal time and place. After
all
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,all
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celebrities
are
also
human
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a human
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being
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beings
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. On the one hand, some
people
assuming
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that
,
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famous
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a famous
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person must
sacrifies
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sacrifice
sacrifices
their privacy for their fame.
People
like to follow them and take their photographs and videos and ask lots of questions
to
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apply
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them and publish them
in
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on
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social
media
platform
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platforms
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.
Hence
,they will be always in
media
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the media
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so
peple
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people
will get more
familior
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familiar
with them,
then
only they will be more famous.Ostensibly,those from the film industry must be in
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the lime
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lime light
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limelight
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,so
this
will be beneficial for them.
Otherwise
,they might
loss
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some chances to act in films, as well as
people
think that they are out of
field
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the field
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,
this
is
also
a fact.
However
,
media
people
should not follow them
where-ever
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wherever
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they go and whatever they do.
On the other hand
,
celebrities
are
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also
have feelings,emotions and
right
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the right
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to enjoy their
life
as they wish. If someone
follow
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follows
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them they won't be feeling comfortable. Nowadays,
media
is not even leaving the
celebrities
( from film industry) family,especially their kids are
also
under camera all the time.
For example
,
last
year
i
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saw a video,where there was a
three year old
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kid with a famous actress
was
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who was
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just arriving to attend a family function,there they
caught
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were caught
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by
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paparazzi
paparazzis
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paparazzi
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,they started clicking the pictures of them and the baby girl got scared and started crying like anything still they
didnt
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didn't
stop following them.
This
is not the right way to make
celebrities
more famous.
Actually
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they are giving trouble to them. they can't enjoy their
life
like all others.Admittedly,they are having
high
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a high
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profile and
high quality
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life
but
that is
not enough to be happy.
Moreover
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they should need their own personal or private
life
. Obviously,we all should respect each and
everyone
's personal
life
. To conclude,the famous
people
are not
a
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public property, to follow them and capture their pictures without their
permision
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permission
,as well as give false news about them.Apparently,they reached
this
position
by
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through
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their
hardwork
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hard work
,so we should respect that and give them their personal space and in between with their
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permission
permision
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,permision
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anyone can follow them and share pictures with them.
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  • public figure
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