Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts
illustrates
a comparison Change the verb form
illustrate
on
household expenditure between Change preposition
of
Japan
and Malaysia
in the year 2010. The concerned sectors including
Housing, Transport, Food, Health care as well as Other goods and services. Overall, the highest participation rate belonged to Other goods and services in Wrong verb form
include
Japan
with 29% in 2010. Meanwhile, the majority expense in Malaysia
was Housing in total
of 34% in the same year. The lowest expenditure for both Add an article
a total
Japan
and Malaysia
was in Health
care region, 6% and 3% respectively. Moving forward with the rest of Correct article usage
the Health
description
, the Correct article usage
the description
second highest
spent in Add a hyphen
second-highest
Japan
was in Housing
category for 21%. Correct article usage
the Housing
On the other hand
, Food
sector was the secondary for Correct article usage
the Food
Malaysia
with 27%. Moreover
, In food
category, 24% was spent in total in Add an article
the food
Japan
which considered
Add a missing verb
is considered
to be
3% less than Change the verb form
being
Malaysia
. Consecutively, Japan
spent 10% more than Malaysia
in Transport aspect with retrospect
of 20% and 10% respectively.Add an article
a retrospect
the retrospect
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite