Some people say that economic development is necessary to reduce the poverty in the world. Others say that economic growth should be stopped immediately to stop damaging the environment. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Poverty is a major issue in many countries,
people
have varied opinions as to whether economic development is a vital step to curb poverty or it has disastrous effects on our environment. In
this
essay, both of these views will be discussed,
However
, I believe
economy
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the economy
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of a
country
can help in reducing
an
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insuffieciency
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insufficiency
among
public
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the public
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. Those who claim that the development in a
country
can have a negative impact on our
environmet
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environment
have their strong points. Take
tourism
for
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example,
although
it is a boon for a
country
as it helps to
genrate
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generate
revenue for the nation, it
also
has been deteriorating our environment by not only affecting our habitat but
also
the fora and fauna. Since
tourism
cause air pollution when
people
travel internationally through
airplanes
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aeroplanes
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and private vehicles are used they emit harmful fumes that
pollutes
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air, and rampant construction of the facilities for visitors
such
as restaurants, hotels and cafes, deforestation is done and
enatural
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natural
habitts
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habitats
habits
such
as forests re
also
destroyed.
Thus
, affecting our environment.
however
, I believe they can be
contrlooe
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control
by
seting
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setting
up strict
policiesagainst
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policies against
them and making some guidelines. Despite these arguments, I, along with others have
this
opinion that the
ecnomic
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economic
growth of
nation
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a nation
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plays a crucial role in improving a condition of a nation. If we encourage
tourism
, the most benefit
that is
gained, is by the lower class
people
such
as cab drivers, rickshaw and auto rider in the
tourism
season they earn
lot
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a lot
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of money which is enough for their living for
an
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year.
Furthermore
, if
country
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a country
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develops in the terms of infrastructure, a huge amount of employment is created for these
people
, and
also
the revenue
that is
acheive
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achieved
by the government in the form of tax can be used for the welfare of these
people
. In conclusion, even though
developing
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the developing
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country
has some drawbacks
such
as pollution and affecting habitat, I believe only economic growth can raise
living
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the living
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conditions of
people
.
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