Some people think that getting a degree from a university is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
many individuals say that
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finding a good vacancy for work is quite easy if a person Remove the comma
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have
a high level of Change the verb form
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education
from any institute. however
, others oppose this
and say rather than higher studies, Add an article
the juvenile
juvenile
should adopt work directly and try to know more about the work experience. in my Fix the agreement mistake
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opnion
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opinion
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think it depends upon individuals choice and their preferences, what they want to do in their life. in upcoming Change the capitalization
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will discuss my viewpoints regarding the notion.
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to begin
with, it has been said that higher education
plays an important role in getting high
rank or good Correct article usage
a high
job
. first
of all, the jobs
such
as,
a doctor, an IPS, an IAS, an advocate, a judge,a teacher Remove the comma
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these kind
of Change the determiner
this kind
these kinds
jobs
really need high
level of Add an article
a high
education
. despite to
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apply
this
, companies also
require those employees who have the depth of the
knowledge. to cite an example, for an Correct article usage
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accountant
a person is only eligible for Add a comma
,accountant
job
if s/he have Add an article
the job
a job
the
knowledge about accounting. Correct article usage
apply
otherwise
s/he is useless.Add a comma
,otherwise
hence
, it has proven that without degrees people even cannot think about such
kind of jobs
.
on the other hand
side, opponent
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opponents
say
that Change the verb form
says
instead
of getting any degree, people should find Add an article
a job
job
directly to get more experience. Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
first
of all, there are many labour jobs
which
even do not need much Correct pronoun usage
that
education
. for example
, stitching, a painter, a Correct your spelling
hairdresser
hair dresser
, a plumber Correct your spelling
hairdresser
such
jobs
according to me required less education
. these jobs
just need experience . for instance
, higher
educator or an officer Correct article usage
a higher
may
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maybe
be do
not have an idea how to make Change the verb form
do
mixture
for Add an article
the mixture
a mixture
construction
of Correct article usage
the construction
building
.Add an article
the building
a building
however
, finding Add an article
a high
high rank
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high-rank
job
is also
quite hard in this
modern era due to high competition. as a result, the jobs
which, do not need much education
are easy to get as compared to getting a degree.
in conclusion, it has been noticed that,
it depends upon the person's choice and Remove the comma
apply
also
their goal settups
. Correct your spelling
setups
however
, I think the vacancies which need higher education
became a daunting task for everyone, because of modernity
and Correct article usage
the modernity
competitive
era.but the people with strong determination and confidence can get Correct article usage
the competitive
such
jobs
,
but will take time.Remove the comma
apply
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