Some people think that getting a degree from a university is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

many individuals say that

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finding a good vacancy for work is quite easy if a person

have

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a high level of

education

from any institute.

however

, others oppose

this

and say rather than higher studies,

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juvenile

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should adopt work directly and try to know more about the work experience. in my

opnion

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opinion

,

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think it depends upon individuals choice and their preferences, what they want to do in their life. in upcoming

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will discuss my viewpoints regarding the notion.

to begin

with, it has been said that higher

education

plays an important role in getting

high

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rank or good

job

.

first

of all, the

jobs

such

as

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a doctor, an IPS, an IAS, an advocate, a judge,a teacher

these kind

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of

jobs

really need

high

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level of

education

. despite

to

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this

, companies

also

require those employees who have the depth of

the

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knowledge. to cite an example, for an

accountant

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a person is only eligible for

job

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the job

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if s/he have

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knowledge about accounting.

otherwise

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,otherwise

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s/he is useless.

hence

, it has proven that without degrees people even cannot think about

such

kind of

jobs

.

on the other hand

side,

opponent

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say

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that

instead

of getting any degree, people should find

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a job

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job

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directly to get more experience.

first

of all, there are many labour

jobs

which

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even do not need much

education

.

for example

, stitching, a painter, a

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hairdresser

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hair dresser

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, a plumber

such

jobs

according to me required less

education

. these

jobs

just need experience .

for instance

,

higher

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educator or an officer

may

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maybe

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be do

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not have an idea how to make

mixture

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the mixture

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for

construction

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of

building

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the building

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.

however

, finding

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a high

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high rank

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job

is

also

quite hard in

this

modern era due to high competition. as a result, the

jobs

which, do not need much

education

are easy to get as compared to getting a degree. in conclusion, it has been noticed that

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it depends upon the person's choice and

also

their goal

settups

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setups

.

however

, I think the vacancies which need higher

education

became a daunting task for everyone, because of

modernity

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and

competitive

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era.but the people with strong determination and confidence can get

such

jobs

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but will take time.