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You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admissions tutor: explain your position apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day. ask how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it.

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Dear Sir / Ma'am, I am writing
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 letter to inform you that I am not able to attend the
interview
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 at the
time
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 you sent me an
inviation
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invitation
 for. I have applied for the course Master of Information Technology in a couple of other universities too.
Last
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 week I received a call to attend the
interview
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in
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 Swinburne University
for
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 Monday
10
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 am and I did acknowledge the
time
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 and
day
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 for the same. So I would not able to attend the
interview
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on
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 the
time
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 you asked me for as it is the same
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 and
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, I have already
commited
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committed
 to the other university. I am sorry to miss
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 opportunity but I hope you understand my situation and give me an alternate
time
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 the same
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 or the other
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. In
adition
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addition
 to that, if you could tell me the process of my
interview
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 that how long it will take and does it include
aptitude
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 test or any other written test in it? I appreciate your positive response. Thank You. Yours Sincerely,
Brijal
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Bridal
Brinjal
 Desai
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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