International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about the impact on local inhabitants and the environment.

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There are lots of countries earning huge profits from international travelling.
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many advantages created by
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kind of tourism are there, a few drawbacks may be harmful to local citizens and the natural world in think. Now, I will explain my aspects advantages and disadvantages of travelling and consider its effects on local
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and foremost, the financial benefit is the core advantage of international tourism, I think. It supports many kinds of businesses
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as restaurants, hotels and entertainment establishments.
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, tourists are serviced not only by travel agents, but they
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purchase a lot of kinds of services which are needed.
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of
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local inhabitants’ incomes are increased and more
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are provided jobs in
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sector.
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, in some countries, travelling is a seasonal activity, because
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tend to travel abroad during the most attractive time. But it is impossible to have nice weather all seasons, some seasons are bad climate. When bad weather times come, the number of travellers are likely to decrease and lots of
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who work in the tourist sector are
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unemployed as well as servicing sectors income tend to drop,
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they make a redundant amongst employees. it is a mentionable drawback to local
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who live in travelling areas. To conclude, the main benefit of worldwide travelling is economic gain, it strengthens countries’ economies and labour markets. But too much dependence on seasonal tourism can be a disadvantage for some weak economic areas because if the travelling sector drops many individuals will be unemployed.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enormous benefit
  • impact
  • local inhabitants
  • environment
  • disadvantages
  • outweigh
  • advantages
  • economic benefits
  • job creation
  • cultural exchange
  • infrastructure development
  • promotion
  • local products
  • environmental impact
  • exploitation
  • resources
  • cultural erosion
  • increased cost of living
  • overcrowding
  • congestion
  • balancing
  • benefits
  • disadvantages
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