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You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do

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Dear Sir/Madam, Good day, I am writing
this
 to inform you that I received a letter from your office yesterday. It has the
acknowledge
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acknowledged
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 receipt and
inclusive
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is inclusive
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 in
that is
 my new bank
card
 which I applied
last
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for last
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 month.
However
, I did not find any
card
 in the envelope. On one hand, I thought I just dropped it because of my excitement I just opened it right away.
Hence
, I searched and it is not there anywhere. I really need that
card
 to fix my loan which will be due
this
 week.
On the other hand
, I called the bank that day to inform
that
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them that
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 my
card
 was not included in the envelope they delivered. They told me to write an email for the incident at the same time they will recheck for the distribution of the letter that happened yesterday.
Accordingly
, I hope you will give me assistance as soon as possible and I will be looking forward
on
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 your response. Yours sincerely, Maze
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • acknowledge receipt
  • compromised security
  • unauthorized transactions
  • identity theft
  • reissue
  • secure (the account)
  • fraudulent activity
  • account holder
  • security measures
  • customer service
  • follow-up
  • discrepancy
  • escalate the issue
  • trace the delivery
  • account security
  • financial risk
  • confidential
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