In most of the societies, the role of mother and father differs, what are the causes of this difference? What will be the parental roles in future?

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in modern societies the parental
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and responsibility varies and the main causes are the busy schedule of the
parents
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. In
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we will intend to describe the main
role
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of
parents
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which is obligatory to raise the
children
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in a well-mannered and cultured
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. There are lots of
difference
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when it comes to
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the
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of a mother and father. It is rightly said the mother lap is the
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school for a child. There are lots of responsibilities which mothers only can play to raise the
kids
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especially up to the age of five years.
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will lead to a situation where the mother only has to take care of their
children
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and which might put her
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a lot of stress.
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, the fathers should not take
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as an advantage and must help their better
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in every possible
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to raise the
kids
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in a decent, cultured and mannered
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. In some cases, it is seen that the father is too busy with his work schedule and
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cannot give much time to their
kids
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. The father
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that money is enough to raise the
kids
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while in many social experiments, it is observed that the
parents
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who are unable to give enough time to their
children
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and
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provide them with lots of expensive toys and those
children
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are still depressed and not doing socially well. The
parents
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should play an important
role
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in raising the
children
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and should not alone depend on nanny or school. The school can provide the education but the care and love which every child deserve shall be given by the
parents
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, it is at
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obligation of both the
parents
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that the needed time should be given to their
children
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to
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, it is
responsibility
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the responsibility
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of the
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to teach their
kids
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for
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social and ethical
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apart from academic teachings. To summarize,
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money can buy
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materialistic things but not the love which every child deserves. So, I reiterate that every parent should take
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responsibility in raising the in a well and cultured
way
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