Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent to you agree or disagree.

Allocation of taxpayers money and utilisation of national funds for the development of the country is a common topic of discussion for many. Whether it should be used to focus on

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of roads is debatable. In my opinion, I feel

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need to be of equal importance and budgeting should be appropriately addressed to provide

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modes of

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to the public be it

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or roadways.

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railways

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and roads play a pivotal role in contributing to the growth of the economy.

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one

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form of

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may have advantages and

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over the other,

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cannot only focus on endorsing

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mode of

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.

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essay will lay out reasons why I think, authorities must invest in

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sectors equally.

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,locomotives reduce carbon emissions

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being environmentally friendly.

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addition

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they can mass transport

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number of

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and goods over larger distances at cheaper fares effectively and reliably.

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, trains are often less prone to traffic jams, congestion and harsh weather conditions

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as fogs and heavy rains.

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ensure

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spend less time commuting and more time being productive.

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,

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also

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provide employment to

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and

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improves

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their livelihood. Cars/buses have the advantage of accessing remote areas -which cannot be reached by trains. Good condition of the

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roads means better control on traffic and fewer accidents and lives lost. Travel by road can be relied upon for shorter distances and for personal purposes.

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increasing carbon emissions are a cause for concern with the advent of electrically charged cars , there may be a positive impact on the carbon footprint in the future. In a nutshell , it wouldn’t be in the best

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of the public, if the government were to only focus on

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mode of

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over the other , as

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means have

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to flourish in their own way to improve the lives of

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and the economy alike.