Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent to you agree or disagree.

Allocation of taxpayers money and utilisation of national funds for the development of the country is a common topic of discussion for many. Whether it should be used to focus on

railways

instead

of roads is debatable. In my opinion, I feel

both

need to be of equal importance and budgeting should be appropriately addressed to provide

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modes of

transportation

to the public be it

railways

or roadways.

Both

railways

and roads play a pivotal role in contributing to the growth of the economy.

Although

one

form of

transportation

may have advantages and

Disadvantages

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over the other,

one

cannot only focus on endorsing

one

mode of

transportation

.

This

essay will lay out reasons why I think, authorities must invest in

both

sectors equally.

Firstly

,locomotives reduce carbon emissions

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therefore

being environmentally friendly.

In

addition

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they can mass transport

large

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number of

people

and goods over larger distances at cheaper fares effectively and reliably.

Moreover

, trains are often less prone to traffic jams, congestion and harsh weather conditions

such

as fogs and heavy rains.

Subsequently

trains

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ensure

people

spend less time commuting and more time being productive.

Furthermore

,

railways

also

provide employment to

people

and

consequently

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their livelihood. Cars/buses have the advantage of accessing remote areas -which cannot be reached by trains. Good condition of the

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roads means better control on traffic and fewer accidents and lives lost. Travel by road can be relied upon for shorter distances and for personal purposes.

Although

increasing carbon emissions are a cause for concern with the advent of electrically charged cars , there may be a positive impact on the carbon footprint in the future. In a nutshell , it wouldn’t be in the best

Interst

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Interest

of the public, if the government were to only focus on

one

mode of

transportation

over the other , as

both

means have

potential

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to flourish in their own way to improve the lives of

people

and the economy alike.