Some people think parents should control the behaviour of children from a very young age but others think we should give them more freedom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many people believe that fathers should supervise their kid's

attitude

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since their birthday. While others support freedom way. I am unconvinced that nature's control may aginst freedom,

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essay will examine both visions clearly. There is no doubt that mothers have a paramount role in their kids'

growth

.

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, fathers usually

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a great influence on their youth's lives by guiding and evaluating their performance to have good morals.

In addition

, they can properly face

growth

's difficulties and approach matters more wisely.

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, while the new generation gets new relationships they may be faces some hardness, their parents' support must encourage them to pass it wisely and correctly as well.

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, mothers always should be a back boon for their

toddler

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from the beginning to the end.

On the other hand

, many people believe that if predecessor gives their minors a space in their

growth

, they will raise their self-confidence and ability to face potential difficulties in their lives and deal with them with wisdom and strength.

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, in

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there are several types of adolescents which may allow some of them to be a real problem for the other, and if they cannot deal with them in their own way, they will be weak and their self-confidence will decrease as well.

Hence

, giving space to think and deal with

growth

sometimes is a great opportunity for the youngster to build their strong personalities. In conclusion, I absolutely believe that to balance the living parent of

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should hold the stick from the middle. Giving toddlers their freedom does not mean losing complete control over their style.