Many people believe that the high levels of violence in films today are causing serious social problems. What are these problems and how could they be reduced?

Violent scenes in the

film

industry appear more and more and it becomes

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theme over the

world

.

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essay will examine

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the

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inclusion of

violence

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episodes

damage

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psychologically

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the psychologically

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and mentally sides of

audience

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the audience

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by increasing criminals in our life and

possible

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overcome

of

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this

social

problem

by introducing strict rules and

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the cinematographers with

this

type of unusual thing.

Firstly

,

violence

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scenes can change your thoughts and feelings for

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disgusting action.

Thus

, it will change your mentality and harm your normal psychology,

then

, you will think that

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someone is normal

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of the

world

. There are great numbers of moviegoers and they take all emotional actions

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near their heart. The possible overcome of

this

problem

is changing rules for accepting a

film

to show the premiere of the

film

to the viewers. If you add some strict rules, you will gain

movie

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a movie

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without unusable moments.

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,

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appearance

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the appearance

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of

violence

led to

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the

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number of criminals in our society and it will have a danger for innocent people. In fact, everyone

dream

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about a life which introduces in the

film

.

Nevertheless

, films don’t show only

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sides of our life and several unnecessary episodes which can abuse

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demonstrated

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in the films.

Subsequently

, people want to repeat actions in the

film

. Unfortunately, sometimes there are high levels of

violence

. The possible solution

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given

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problem

is declaiming the projects of authors and it can decrease the level of criminal over the

world

. To conclude, the major

world

problem

of

film

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the film

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industry is

high

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a high

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degree of

violence

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violent

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moments in movies of modern projects and effecting negatively to audience’s mind.

This

problem

can be partly alleviated by adding

the

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a

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rigorous examination for all works. I will certainly use it if it was introduced in my area.