In some countries, people are spending long hours at the workplace. Why does this happen? Is it a positive or negative development?

In some parts of the world, working overtime has been increasingly prevalent among employees. There are several reasons why

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trend occurs but unfortunately, I believe that the negative impacts of

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issue far outweigh the advantages.

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and foremost,

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phenomenon is becoming more and more popular in both developed and developing countries, where there are abundant jobs in the job market.

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, due to overpopulation, the

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market is becoming more competitive than ever. Take China,

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, overpopulation is a serious problem that each citizen needs to make an attempt to

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harder than anyone else to grab any job opportunities and they are willing to take on some extra

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to prove their potential to employers or directors to gain promotion and get higher income. The

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reason for

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movement is none other than as the world is becoming progress, more

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needs to be done but they can’t leave

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task for tomorrow.

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, they choose to stay at the office longer to do

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task until the job is completed.

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,

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tendency definitely has detrimental effects on human beings, especially on their health. As workers have to spend more time on their

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, they will have less time to take care of themselves. Working for long hours means they do not have time to come home and have a proper meal, refresh for the

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working day. As a consequence,

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may lead to a decline in

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efficiency because they no longer have enough energy to receive a new task, and they feel exhausted with office hours.

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, according to recent surveys, Japanese office workers need to spend more than 10 hours a day on average to finish their jobs and many of them could not stand the pressure of

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and colleagues, they commit suicide. In conclusion, spending half of their days at

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is somehow may

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to win promotion, but from my

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that may cause more harmful impacts on humans

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as health and

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-life balance.