In some countries, people are spending long hours at the workplace. Why does this happen? Is it a positive or negative development?
In some parts of the world, working overtime has been increasingly prevalent among employees. There are several reasons why
this
trend occurs but unfortunately, I believe that the negative impacts of this
issue far outweigh the advantages.
First
and foremost, this
phenomenon is becoming more and more popular in both developed and developing countries, where there are abundant jobs in the job market. Furthermore
, due to overpopulation, the labor
market is becoming more competitive than ever. Take China, Change the spelling
labour
for example
, overpopulation is a serious problem that each citizen needs to make an attempt to work
harder than anyone else to grab any job opportunities and they are willing to take on some extra work
to prove their potential to employers or directors to gain promotion and get higher income. The second
reason for this
movement is none other than as the world is becoming progress, more work
needs to be done but they can’t leave this
task for tomorrow. As a result
, they choose to stay at the office longer to do this
task until the job is completed.
Secondly
, this
tendency definitely has detrimental effects on human beings, especially on their health. As workers have to spend more time on their work
, they will have less time to take care of themselves. Working for long hours means they do not have time to come home and have a proper meal, refresh for the next
working day. As a consequence, this
may lead to a decline in work
efficiency because they no longer have enough energy to receive a new task, and they feel exhausted with office hours. For instance
, according to recent surveys, Japanese office workers need to spend more than 10 hours a day on average to finish their jobs and many of them could not stand the pressure of work
and colleagues, they commit suicide.
In conclusion, spending half of their days at work
is somehow may benefits
to win promotion, but from my Change the verb form
benefit
perspective
that may cause more harmful impacts on humans Add a comma
,perspective
such
as health and Replace the word
losing
loosing
Correct your spelling
losing
work
-life balance.Submitted by Duyen Pham
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