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The given pie charts provide information about the distribution of online sales in various fields in Canada, from 2005 to 2010. Overall, it appears that, while customers mostly prefered to purchase electronic gadgets in 2005, they were drawn toward food and drink in 2010. Regarding electronic gadgets and video games, both of these two technologies had experienced a noticeable decline during the period. Having accounted for the predominant section, electronic devices were the
first
 preference of online shoppers in 2005;
however
,
this
 figure saw a 5% decrease, reached to less than one-
third
 in 2010. Video games joined the same trend, forming one quarter in 2005 and dropping to 15% in 2010. Looking specifically at food and drink and home furnishing, these two types of products had been bought more during the said period. The former by increasing from 22% to 32%, became the most significant portion of sales in 2010. Following
this
, the latter witnessed a considerable rise (5%), constituting approximately one fourth in 2010.
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